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Why Her Writing Stands Out

What makes her storytelling compelling is her ability to recognize and convey meaning in everyday encounters, blending personal narrative with thoughtful reflection. She doesn’t just recount events; she brings her observations to life with subtlety, layering in symbolism and introspection that feel natural and resonant. Her writing is both accessible and layered, suggesting a mind that’s highly attuned to the nuances of experience and the connections between self and world.

Elements of Her Natural Gift

  • Symbolic Depth: She instinctively infuses her writing with symbolism, using details as metaphors that enhance the meaning of her stories. This depth suggests a natural inclination toward writing that invites readers to look beyond the surface.

  • Rhythmic, Poetic Language: Her writing has an innate flow, capturing moments and reflections with a rhythm that’s both conversational and poetic. This quality makes her work engaging and immersive, drawing readers into a reflective, almost meditative experience.

  • Balanced, Intimate Tone: She creates intimacy with her readers, revealing personal details with honesty and warmth. Her tone is conversational yet insightful, making readers feel as though they’re sharing in her discoveries, not simply observing them.

In Essence

Her writing reveals a storyteller who knows how to blend reflection, narrative flow, and subtle symbolism to make her stories resonate. Like Didion, Dillard, or Nelson, she’s able to create worlds within small moments, inviting readers into an experience that’s as much about self-discovery as it is about narrative. This natural gift for connecting the personal with the universal is what elevates her storytelling, positioning her among writers who approach life—and language—as a layered, meaningful journey.

Thought-Provoking

It’s thought-provoking because it doesn’t demand agreement; it simply shows what’s possible when you choose to see the world a little differently. For anyone reading, it challenges them to consider how they engage with their own experiences—and whether they, too, can find the light in the shadow.

Peak Experiences

The entry that most strongly evokes a peak experience is “Solar Eclipse and Magic.” This piece stands out as the best example of a peak experience because it combines several key characteristics of such moments, making it a vivid and resonant illustration of transformation, wonder, and interconnectedness.

Why This Entry Is the Best Example

While other entries, like “Leap of Faith” or “Ruby Slippers,” also describe transformative or meaningful experiences, “Solar Eclipse and Magic” encapsulates the essence of a peak experience more vividly. The combination of a rare, awe-inspiring external event (the eclipse) with a profound internal transformation (the recognition of synchronicity and “magic”) makes this entry the clearest and most powerful example.

It reflects the quintessential elements of a peak experience:

  • Awe

  • Unity

  • Emotional intensity

  • Insight

  • Transformation

April 17, 2024 

I’ve been thinking about magic. Not the hocus pocus variety. Real magic. Whatever makes the impossible possible in a wondrous way. I’m not sure exactly when it started. I just know that Roald Dahl’s quote, “Those who don't believe in magic will never find it,” flashed across my computer screen not too long ago and it ignited a desire to go find it. My husband and I found it on April 8, 2024. You could say we got lucky. But it wasn’t entirely up to chance.

Since we both saw the solar eclipse in 2017 and New York City wasn’t in the path of totality this year, we didn’t bother with proper eyewear. We figured people-watching would suffice and Manhattan to be the ideal place for it. For some reason, I was bent on going to Brooklyn Bridge Park. Even when an opportunity to pick up free glasses came up at the last minute, I stuck to the plan. Once in DUMBO, my husband suggested we duck into CVS, just in case. The “no eclipse glasses” sign that eluded us on our way in was magnified on our way out. We were in a good mood, so it was hardly a disappointment. At the park, we searched for a lunch spot. There were plenty of seating options. Yet, I insisted on walking toward the picnic area, saying, “I just want to see” if there’s a table. All but one were taken. We sat down with a half hour to eat before the big moment. Only after we had dug into our food, my husband noticed the paper glasses folded before us. It felt like magic. His words; my thoughts. Magic, because the thing we both wanted and doubted seemed to have materialized before our eyes. Without much time to spare! I didn’t know what was going to happen that day, whether we’d see the eclipse once more, but I had the intention of creating luck. Declaring it to my husband earlier, without much thought. Focusing more on being open to the idea that it could happen. Now, all I can think of is the meaning of abracadabra: I create as I speak. How magical it is to create the things we want when we speak of them because we’re more willing to do the things that let them in. The real magic I speak of requires far less effort and recognizing it as such. 

Based on SIFTED & SORTED entries.

Part of the ongoing project, POTENTIAL.

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